Friday, March 28, 2008

55 Flash Fiction Friday

Well, it's Friday, had you noticed? There some exciting things round these parts but I shall wait to share those details till later. For now, I'll just point out that Fridays are a great time to write flash fiction, and if you do, there are other people who want to know about it! You can hook up with them over HERE.



My flash fiction:





Ice tinged wind scrapes my face, a fitting herald. Once inside, empty eyes and cold smiles top prim versions of the latest fashions. The woman who’s undoubtedly been assigned to welcome newcomers approaches. My replies to her small talk questions become progressive more outrageous till her facade cracks into a genuine smile. Perhaps there’s hope.

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9 comments:

  1. GillFriday, March 28, 2008 at 1:47:00 PM PDT

    Bravo!!!
    Humour has diffused many a precarious situation and relaxed many a pretentious buttwad.
    Love ya girl!
    xoxo

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  2. JocelynFriday, March 28, 2008 at 9:54:00 PM PDT

    You know, that gift of charm is so rare. Don't let up on the stiff faces, eh?

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  3. Joe MasseSaturday, March 29, 2008 at 2:43:00 AM PDT

    Where there's lunch, there's hope.

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  4. limeSaturday, March 29, 2008 at 6:46:00 AM PDT

    i so want to arrive at some prim tea party on the back of red molly with you.

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  5. furiousBallSaturday, March 29, 2008 at 7:38:00 AM PDT

    this was nice amiga, i want some tea now

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  6. cathySaturday, March 29, 2008 at 1:47:00 PM PDT

    I bet you could make the exhibits at Madame Tussards smile.

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  7. SSaturday, March 29, 2008 at 11:41:00 PM PDT

    OMG You had to do a LUNCHEON?
    :O


    LUNCHEONNNNNN
    LUNCHEONNNN
    LUNCHEONNNN!!!!

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  8. JacobSunday, March 30, 2008 at 4:34:00 PM PDT

    Croly HAP! How do you DO that? I am impressed. As usual. And I am sticking with what Joe says.

    I hope. I hope.

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  9. HobbesTuesday, April 22, 2008 at 6:23:00 PM PDT

    Wow. You packed a lot into 55 words!

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