Late at night, fingers stroke, caressing a forbidden love. Silence is so important, critical. If heard, if he discovers them together like this, at this hour he will be so annoyed. She smiled, enjoying the stolen moments. Then she froze as she heard, "Will you please turn off that bloody computer and come to bed!"
Thursday, April 26, 2007
Flash Fiction
Late at night, fingers stroke, caressing a forbidden love. Silence is so important, critical. If heard, if he discovers them together like this, at this hour he will be so annoyed. She smiled, enjoying the stolen moments. Then she froze as she heard, "Will you please turn off that bloody computer and come to bed!"
let me be the first to congratulate you. Must go now , the coffee is coming down my nose! LMFAO!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is great. And so familiar at the same time. Oh...I know why. Because I heard that utterance the other night.
ReplyDeleteLOL! Those are very common words around my home! Great 55 today Logo! Hope you have a great weekend!
ReplyDeleteLOL, i recycled too. this IS one of my favorites of yours.
ReplyDeleteWhat Lime said!
ReplyDeleteCathy~ :p Oh good, glad you enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteArm~ Ah yes, it speaks to the soul of all night owl computer addicts.
Breazy~ Have a good weekend! They are heard around these parts too, too often according to some.
Lime~ I quite like yours as well, and I have to say, a comment from the bedroom while I was writing a new 55 inspired me to bring this one out (snicker snicker)
Snavy~ See above :p
How many of us have lived through that scenario!
ReplyDeleteLOL
Happy 55 Friday Logo
that is so triple x :)
ReplyDeleteWell, I would've opted for less harsh language, like, "that darn computer".
ReplyDeleteYou can't give it away with a pic like that, silly.
ReplyDeleteThat was perfect! You are so talented.
ReplyDeleterecycled? i believe i speak for all who didn't get to read this little gem the first time around (which includes me, naturally), when i say Thanks, Logo -- Well Done! ; ) xox
ReplyDeleteLOL...there have been many nights like that in our house. But we alternate who is on the keyboard trying to type in silence.
ReplyDeleteHave you been in my house????
ReplyDeleteSusie~ I know, I guess I should have said Flash NON fiction
ReplyDeleteOld Mule~ I know, Im just racy that way
Grunt~ I know, Im just racy that way :p
Diesel~ Sorry, I don't know what I was thinking, give me another chance, Im sure I can figure it out.
Balou~ Aw, thanks!!
Neva~ It recently was re-enacted here so I remembered it and thought I would bring it back out.
Em~ Its nice to share, good on ya!
Annie~ Was I too close to the window? Did I leave smudges? :p
Ha!!! At least he can't blame ME this time.
ReplyDelete(psssst....see you tonight?....heh-heh....)
Gawpo~ :p Well NOW he will, way to go!!
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