"Outside of a dog, a book is probably man’s best friend, and inside of a dog, it’s too dark to read."
The issue here is the definite article "the", specifically in it's final usage in the quote. My opinion is that the word needs to be altered to the adjective "several", with an additional upgrade to the plural form for the final noun in the sentence.This is how one speaks to grad students, right?
Yes, Cooper, it is. Now get rid of your superfluous apostrophe. ;)I quite agree with Al and with Cooper's upgrade.
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