Thursday, September 20, 2007

Flash Fiction Friday

55 word story

Guiltily she glanced around. It was just a small lapse, surely it wouldn’t really matter. After all, it was dark and who was going to see her? Of course she would know, but hey, everyone knows it’s easier to get forgiveness than permission, right? Besides, error was inevitable and isn’t that why confession was invented?

17 comments:

S said...

Ok now I have to know what you did?

Did you wear thongs with dress slacks? NO! You didn't!

You didn't wear white after Labor Day, say it's not true!

S said...

I know what it was...this is about the scissors, isnt it?

Nessa said...

I learned something here today. Don't ask permission.

Mike Minzes said...

Great 55!

Liquid said...

Me too!

lime said...

you wore mom jeans?

armalicious said...

Very good 55. I feel like I could have written this one. The lapsing stuff and all...

Flash said...

Ohhh, nice setup for almost anything!!

maybe a story continuation next week???

Great work though.

and I played too1

tsduff said...

I need a sign like that to flash to my daughter... she likes to inform me of all my fashion faux pas, which are legion.

egan said...

Did you fall off the wagon?

Toadee said...

wonderful, teasing, amusing prose

snowelf said...

hehehe!
I bet you wore pj pants somewhere! ;)

Great 55!
--snow

Gill said...

One-
One-
Nine....
Fashion Crime.

xo
Blue

Anonymous said...

Lol. Don't worry; I won't tell Mall Diva.

Anonymous said...

why even ask, right? i like that. are you going to post the outfit? hope your week-end is lovely!

Anonymous said...

black stockings with white shoes??

Jacob said...

Brown shoes with green skirt?