Friday, June 30, 2006

It's Friday, I'm in love....

with FLASH FICTION!
here's a couple of 'em for ya.
(If you are not sure what this is about, go see Susie. )
------------------------
Heavy clouds opened and rain swept away the sticky heat of the day. She banished thoughts of work and set across the fields for a walk. Delighted, she stretched out her arms and opened her mouth to falling droplets. Rather than liquid, she felt light. The lightening bolt was the last thing she ever felt.


-----------------------------

Last Friday Kyahgirl asked for a topical 55, and since I would never disappoint my twin, here it is!


An involuntary twitch of his left eye began as he searched instinctively for a pattern in the swirling madness. He could make out, yes, there were circular shapes, but they were so irregular, here an ellipse, there an oval. "Whatcha think," a cheerful voice inquired, "Doesn't it look better?" He turned, smiling, "Sure" he said.

13 comments:

lime said...

i still want to know what the heck the shape is.

Fred said...

Looks like I'll have to drop on by to see Susie. I'm lost. Momentarily, I hope...

barefoot_mistress said...

Damn those metal fillings, she thought, as she gasped her last breath!.....
LOL When I get up there, Im hijacking the lawnmower and making some crazy patterns in your grass!

Good job as always Madam!

Blither said...

I love reading your 55's! Just love'em! Talent TALENT!!!

lime said...

btw, my more than 55 is at idiot's

Candace said...

Ha ha!! I LOVE the lightning one!! :-D And an appreciative snicker to #2 as well. :-)

Candace said...

Lucky you, Logo!! Who knew there was so much info to be had about cash register?

Sar said...

Wait, let me think for a sec.....yep, yes, true indeedy. It's a fact, you write just as well whether I'm reading you from VA or CA! :)

Hope you're living it up lady logo!

Kyahgirl said...

Hi Logo-great stories as always. Thanks for my own story!
p.s. I answered your questions today.

schnoodlepooh said...

I'm not really sure what you're talking about, but just let me say that kyahgirl's dog, Casper, is the twin for my dog, Baxter. So how's that for very very cool???!!

Minka said...

The last one is so you and Mr.Logo.
I can picture him and his acceptance really easily!
Oh and it is Monday, not Friday..thought I'd bring it up since nobody else seems to be pointing it out! :)

DaMasta said...

is that a dolphin?

uh..

The Grunt said...

I've been neglecting you, Logo. I'm sorry. Good 55's!