Friday, August 10, 2007

Flash Fiction

Blue eyes mirrored the warm smile on his lips.
“I have Twinkies in my lunch today. I’ll share if you want.”
She agreed, giggling shyly. Moments later he was startled to hear himself make the same offer to another cute girl.
Back in class his palms began to sweat as clock hands raced to noon.

19 comments:

S said...

Heh.....:D....heh....

TLP said...

Looks like ol' blue eyes won't get any of the Twinkies today.

ARM said...

Ha! Typical.

Now I want a twinkie, though.

Balou said...

You should write a book of Flash 55 Fictions. I'll design it for you. :)

Snow White said...

Just like a guy... *grin* Great 55!

goldennib said...

Winderful. I love Twinkies.

Breazy said...

Mmmmm I haven't had twinkies in years!

Great 55! Have a good weekend!

MONA said...

wow! the graet magnanimous gentleman just did himself in,,LOL!!!

maybe there will be a catfight at lunchtime...& then they will ultimately stomp on his twinkies and also his face and move away in a huff! :D

Rebicmel said...

lol this is a nice 55. lol kinda got himself into a bit of pickle though,

Dan said...

Damned Twinkie Don Juan! :)

lime said...

ah the learning curve for our young man will be sharp indeed...

S said...

I know, I know, he could give each girl a twinkie, taking none for himself.

weirsdo said...

I went to school with Jessie Steinbrenner, George Steinbrenner's daughter. She always had a Hostess product in her lunch. They were great for trades. The family had to move after George was indicted for, I think, laundering illegal campaign contributions to Nixon through his Great American Shipbuilding Co. workers' Christmas bonuses.The rest is history.
(flash non-fiction)

jadey said...

very nice 55 mine is up.

Diesel said...

He should just tell one of the girls that he change his mind because he doesn't want her to get fat like the other one.

goldennib said...

Diesel is so bad, in a smart evil way.

S said...

Takes BOTH twinkies, and force feeds them to Diesel.

That oughta solve the problem right there!

:D

K?

snowelf said...

Awww Logophile! That is so adorable!!
I'm all about twinkies! Yum! :)

--snow

G said...

Excellent! Love this flash fiction - it's just so damned adorable. Insert Homer Simpson voice here - mmmmmm Twinkies.