Friday, April 21, 2006

55 Friday

For the last several weeks on Friday I have been doing Flash Fiction (or nano fiction) over at Susie's blog.
The 55 Friday originated over here.
The idea is that the fiction should have exactly 55 words, at least one discernable character and a storyline.
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She felt the pressure building inside her.
She tingled, her body was ready, crying out for release.
Her breathing became more rapid and her eyes closed.
Her spine arched, as a huge gasp of air filled her lungs.
Her face contorted and she gave voice to her satisfaction.
It felt so very good to sneeze.
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It is possible my cold influenced my topic choice.
So there ya have it, wax eloquent or something.

17 comments:

The Grunt said...

Hey, I love sneezing. If I smoked, then I'm sure I'd be lighting up after one of my atomic sneezes.

snavy said...

LMAO!! Very clever & bless you!

DaMasta said...

sweet release!

hope you get bettaaaaAAAAACHOOO!

Seamus said...

'scuse you, 'scuse me...I have to wash my face now! :) Happy Friday

The Village Idiot said...

Hey hey...that sounds like mine..and Zyrtec or allegra will work wonders

barefoot_mistress said...

Sneezing is a good thing! Have you been able to squeeze out any of those technicolor sneezes like I have?

Thanks for playing, Logooooo!

Logophile said...

Grunt~ I hear that. 'Cept, I hate the ones that knock my back out, yes, that has happened, and it sucks.

Snav~ Thanks :-D

Damasta~ Ah, thanks, sweetie, ah-choo.

Seamus~ Sorry about that, I will try to use a tissue next time. Happy Friday!

Idiot~ Thanks for the tip, and yeah, it does share some similar features to yours, hmmm, interesting.

Logophile said...

Susie~No, seems green and yellow are my limit. eeeeoooowww

miss_lissa said...

haha

*passes a kleenex*

It's possible my cold influenced the giggles over your 55 this week.
Very nice!

and ewwwwww
TMI bout the yellow boogies! lmao

lime said...

LMAO! i love it. well done

Egan said...

I did a careful recount and find 54 words.

Logophile said...

Miss Lissa~ Thanks, sorry to gross you out with tales of my secretions, I will try to be more thoughtful in the future.

Lime~ Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

Egan~ I apologize profusely, I shall write Bill Gates immediately and tell him the word count feature of MS Word is not up to your standards.

Egan said...

Wise you are Logophile.

Logophile said...

well, I have been learning from you these last few months.
Kick ass this weekend!

Kat said...

hehehe, very funny!

oh, and bless you! Hope the cold gets better. I hate spring colds!

Logophile said...

Thanks Kat!
I am already feeling better.

Franci said...

What a challenge!
And what a great solution.
I counted and found 55, including the 'a', which is really not a word.